Sunday, January 27, 2008

Haiku time

Electro beauty:
fills my veins, assaults my mind,
forces me to dance.

5 comments:

FlipFace said...

Niiice!
I want to try and write a response:

flowing notes take flight
beats evolve as rhythm grows
the soul awakens

Anonymous said...

thanks for the response!
more haiku! more haiku!

Lauren said...

haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator.

Not my original work but it is still the best damn haiku I've ever heard.. (no offense)

Haszari said...

That is a dang fine haiku!

Haszari said...

I am feeling tired
too much crispy pork for lunch
do not mind Jizo